YnM doujinshi

[yubari]

Hahaha! I told you guys its a scrappy one and horrible!! [img]redface.gif[/img] And that was my very fist effort you know...it's actually done for sakura-chan(my friend from other Message board member)for her doujin. And honestly I'm kinda lazy that time... [img]tongue.gif[/img] + depressed over lotsa things that day and the result is horrible fanfic...hehehee...and oh yeah thanx for the advices! I'll remember that but truly I've read this one fanfic and its really really really good!! Unfortunately I can't remember the add. I'll post the add here if I remember it back...Oooo!! It's Tatsumi having conversation with Muraki bout Tsuzuki. They were arguing about...can't clearly remember bout what but its totally the best...IMHO...

[yukawai]

could it be A Gentleman conversation ? thre isn't much good YnM fics with argumenting Watari and Tastumi in this world ^^

Scarlet, ff.net bugged at chapter 2 so I'll be waiting to read the rest but from what I saw already I can already ask something: could you translate the jap expression? there is a little everywhere and even if you can pretty guess what they means it's always cool to knoq exactly ^^

For the rest I'll post a review

[Scarlets]

Yue, I'll translate it for you but do you want me to e-mail it to you or should I just post it here? Anyway, thanx for reading the fic! You have my gratitude!!!

[yukawai]

er, post it here, it's the easiest way. as for readig, well, de nada ^____^~ we gotta encourage people writting fanfictions! more so if they're good ^_~

[Scarlets]

okay!

Daijoubu ka? - Are you alright?
Yoshi - Alright! / Yes!
Teme - Darn you!
Yamete - Stop it!
Sugoii - Wonderful / Great
Sou ka - Oh, right
Ohayo Gozaimasu, Sensei - Good morning, Teacher
Nandato - What?!
shikashi - but...
Tadaima - I'm back!
hora, mite mite - here, look what I've got!
Kawaii - Cute
sakura - cherry blossom
hontou ni - really?
yatta - Yay!
Onegai - please
iyaa - no


i think that's all, did I miss anything? [img]graemlins/hmmm.gif[/img]